Wednesday, October 1, 2014

Another Query Draft

Dear Agent Person,
 Varick withdrew to silent southern South Dakota to discern the mysteries of his dreams. He doesn’t know he is on a murderous errand for a local tribe. Mia crashes, literally, into his life, and he starts to wonder if it really was by chance. But, to hell with it, he finally has some purpose.
Together, they drive west. Mia spends most of her time asleep in the cab of Varick's old pick-up. It is there that she can communicate with her parasite, Amelia. Amelia traveled through a water portal into Mia’s mind and is controlling and pervading Mia through her memories. Mia must keep herself separate from Amelia while becoming obsessed with protecting the memory of a lost child.
         As Amelia fully forms within Mia’s mind, the journey is laid out before her. Mia fears what will happen once they reach the sacred Cathedral Spires, but going there is the only way to rid herself of Amelia. While the trio near the Black Hills, the Chief waits for his revenge against his own soil and takes charge against Varick to prevent him from fulfilling his mission.
Please consider my novel, Water and Stone. It is complete at 92,000 words. This novel should appeal to those who enjoy sci-fi works like those of Margaret Atwood and the psychological horror of Stephen King.
The first chapter of Water and Stone was chosen for awards for the Agnes Hyde writing contest, and it was published in the Spring 2014 edition of the literary journal Prairie Winds.
         I look forward to hearing from you. Thank you for your time and consideration.
Kind Regards, 

Amber R. Hiles 

@hiles_amber
www.linkedin.com/in/amberhiles/